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Thursday, 11 June 2020

lucky dip

lucky dip

The threatening storm started to get worse: thunder crashed in the sky. The girl rushed into the arcade. She spotted the Claw Machine and noticed all the teddy's

inside it.  She really wanted one special bunny. The coin was dropped into the machine by Lola. The claw moved down and grabbed the bunny. Lola was delighted.  The claw lifted the bunny but the bunny slipped out and fell down Just then Gran grabbed her arm roughly pulling her out of the arcade..




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1 comment:

  1. Miss Henderson12 June 2020 at 21:47

    These are fantastic sentences Blake! I especially like this sentence "the threatening storm started to get worse: thunder crashed in the sky", it helped to paint an image in my head of the storm.

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